
She is running, the heels of her five-inch Barbie pink stilettos click-clacking against the pavement as her legs furiously thrust forward. Her dress is torn; her heavily made-up face has become pale, and her eyes, outlined in a thick contour of black, are as wide as that of a deer caught in the headlights. When she trips on her own feet, she flings off her shoes and continues running barefoot, her neon-colored toenails gleaming like beacons in the darkness. It is a midsummer’s night, but her arms are prickled with goose bumps, and shivers tingle up her spine. She glances over her shoulder and quickens her pace, her breath coming in short but heavy intervals, making it seem like she is gasping for oxygen. The air smells strongly of drink; she can still taste the alcohol that had passed over her tongue a just a short while ago. At this moment, however, she is not overtaken by the effects of drink, for the adrenaline pumping within her seemed to have beaten out all other sensations in her body. Her heartbeat is flying; she looks behind her once more, her eyes searching for something in the night. Perhaps she imagines it, but for one terrifying second, she catches sight of a figure in the shadows—a moving outline blacker than the surrounding gloom. She begins to tremble. Her bottom lip quivers, and a chilling scream escapes her throat. Her eyes dart desperately toward the several unlit mansions along the road, but no help comes. She is alone.
Except—she’s not.
Her body tenses as something sharp bounces off the back of her head. It lands behind her, and she stops to see what it was: one of her own hot pink stiletto shoes. A warm trickle of blood oozes down onto her neck, which is suddenly grasped by ice-cold fingers. They wrap around her tightly, sending her into an oblivion darker than the shades of night. The last thing she hears is a raspy, all-too-familiar whisper:
“I have you now.”

I feel like you accessed the noosphere and plucked this story straight from my head. It reminds me a great deal of a story that has been bouncing around my head for awhile and has been waiting for me to put pen to paper (in a good way of course; I am not seriously accusing you of brain plagiarism).
I think I like yours better; if mine ever gets written I will try to remember to give you credit for writing it first.
You know what they say… Great minds think alike, although I don’t know if I would exactly qualify my mind as great.Crazy? Yes. Always off in the clouds? Yes. But not great
And don’t worry, I’m glad to have further inspired your already existing inspiration
Superbly set up and executed.
Thank you! I look forward to checking out your blog!
I really like this! It makes me want to hear more!
Thanks; I’m glad to hear it!
I am intruiged. You have a great writing style- It makes me want to know what’s going to happen next. I like the picture on the side to
Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me