Barriers

I’m sorry, my dear—

The barrier between us

Is too strong to breach.

on June 14, 2012 at 10:25 pm | Reply liz blackmore

I must be bummed today. I am seeing the dark side of everything I am reading. I see this as a refelection of prejudice. This is a strong poem for being a few lines.
on June 15, 2012 at 5:55 pm | Reply The Wandering Youth

beautiful meaning in the poem and the picture really fits
- on June 15, 2012 at 8:22 pm | Reply thewritingaficionado
  
  Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
on June 18, 2012 at 4:46 pm | Reply merlinspielen

This is solid! I really like the complexity contained in what seems such a simple poem.
- on June 18, 2012 at 10:53 pm | Reply thewritingaficionado
  
  Thank you! I always worry myself with whether or not I put enough complexity in my shorter poems, so that means a lot to me!

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