Don’t you ever wonder
What it would be like
To be something greater—
To be as great
As you could have been
Had you tried—
Had you been given the chance?
Don’t you ever wonder
If you deserve more
Than this too-small town
And these too-familiar faces
And that girl of yours
Who will never give you
The entirety of her heart?
Don’t you ever wonder
How great it would be
To do what you desire,
Whatever it may be,
With me at your side—
Loving you more truly
Than anything you’ve known?
Such a simple life
For an extraordinary person
Like you to live,
But an extraordinary life
Could be lived so simply
As long as you take a breath
And jump in.


Good one! It reminded me the quote “well done is better than well said” and with small alteration I would say “well done is better than well thought”
Thank you so much!
I agree Neeraj, and yes it is a very good poem!
Thanks, Liz!
I especially liked that one.
Thank you! I’m glad to hear it!
Amen and applause. You have a chap in mind?
Thank you! And oh, gosh.. What a question.
You expected that question to not be asked?
Well, I sure hoped it wouldn’t. Anyway, though, I like to claim that all my works are purely fictional.
So very nice…
Thank you, Sheila!
very well written! i like that.
Thanks! I’m so glad!
Lovely it gives a wonderful picture!
Go ahead and jump…
I don’t think the water in this picture is deep enough!
Well then don’t jump in – just jump over! Rubber rain-boots puddle splashing is also fun
That last stanza – where you turned around the “extraordinary world”…wonderful. Just wonderful way of words and thoughts.
Wow, thank you so much!
i hear your heart singing a beautiful song…
David in Maine USA
Thanks, David!
great poem & the picture is beautiful.
Thanks so much!
Always a pleasure
Your words paint beautiful journeys for our mind… Thank you. I have nominated you for the “One Lovely Blog” award. Wishing you a week filled with sunshine and butterflies! http://butterflyjulz.wordpress.com/2012/06/11/the-start-of-one-lovely-week-bella-bleue-style/
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words and this award!
I love the picture it goes so well with the poem did you take it yourself?
Yes! I take all of my pictures myself!